Top Ten
Quik-Hints
Maybe
there's much more to learning to write than ten hints, but I
think that if you did the following you could be sure that you
were producing the best work you were capable of.
- Begin in
the middle of things and catch us up as you go.
- Don't write
the boring or mundane details of life unless you have a dramatic
reason to do so.
- Make the
reader feel what the character feels.
- Don't dwell
on the scenery or setting, except as it dramatically motivates or
illuminates the characters.
- "Pass the
Potatoes" (from my friend Elinor Lipman) -- make sure that when
you write dialogue you don't forget the other actions and
reactions taking place while people are talking.
- Actions
have consequences, or ought to. Every action in your story should
lead on to a later action.
- Foreshadowing
can prepare a reader for even the most incredible events (from
Chekhov--if the audience sees a gun on the wall in the first act
someone will be firing it in the last act.)
- Give
characters a strong drive to accomplish something or to avoid
something. Robert Olen Butler uses the word yearning; what does
your character yearn for?
- Write
regularly, and give your writing time priority.
- Don't be
afraid to edit even your prettiest and most compelling writing if
it doesn't fit the story.
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